Okay, I think I made it plain in one of my last rants that I'm not a fan of scriptfics. But as I've said, YMMV and everything else.

However to one specific fanbrat, if your going to write a scriptfic, try not to at the very least have your first chapter so blatantly rip off your fandom's pilot/first episode. There were only major changes were the names of the characters, very little of the situations and the, ahem, face, of one of the main characters!

If you are going to write a story, scriptfic or prose, why blantantly rip of an episode like that?

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1 - 12 Zachary Quinto (x-mas inspired)
13 - 36 V the series 2009
37 - 60 Heroes
61 - 84 Glee
85 - 108 Dollhouse

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So your premise is, when Dean from 2009 lands in 2014, he doesn't go back. I like this premise. Trouble is, your PoV character is 2014!Dean, and 2014!Dean thinks of himself as 'Dean', and 2014!Dean thinks of 2009!Dean as 'Dean'. It's just like all the fics that mention 'the blond man' when both characters onstage are blond men, only worse—seriously, author, 2014!Dean has spent a year in the company of his younger self and has yet to think of a nickname for him?

Also, if you're gonna say that only 2009!Dean and one other character refer to 2014!Dean as 'Dean', with the implication that this has been the case for months and therefore 2014!Dean's gotten out of the habit of responding to his own first name, might not wanna have a fourth character say 'Dean' and expect 2014!Dean to answer.

i posted atreu a few days ago, so here is her brother althe.

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YMMV, but saké does not generally make for good lubrication during anal sex as alcohol does not generally contain lube.

94 pictures, with adult themes, sex, nudity, possible squick factor, and those pesky Caliente sisters.


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I love your story. I really do. But Sam and Dean Winchester swear. They will not be saying "Oh gosh". The author's note in the middle of the fic explaining that you don't take God's name in vain was pretty annoying.

The random "Oh gosh" mentions keep throwing me out of the fic. I really love it. (And I seriously think Sam in labor is going to be screaming something worse than "Oh gosh". Especially since he's been in labor for ten hours.)

Next time, please don't place your beliefs on the characters.

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Can anyone please point me in the direction of the Paley Center panels on BSG and Buffy (any and all whedon work?)

I am searching around on youtube and the paley site itself and am having trouble. please and thanks!

Title: Speech Therapy
Word count: 1070
Status: On-going
Continuity: RotF (pre-movie)
Character(s): Hoist & Mudflap
Summary: Even in a race of super-advanced robots, not all defects can be repaired by a medic. The team in charge of raising the twins is certainly learning that firsthand. And now they have to find some solution for the problem before both their lab and their sanity are destroyed.

Notes: Aha! We’re at the crux of the problem, here. Now Hoist can begin sorting things out.

...Spell checking this part was a BITCH.

(Given Mudflap’s current emotional state, Hoist decided it would be beneficial to both of them to spend some time together.)

Okay. So this is my first time posting here, and coincidentally, my first attempt at poetry. So naturally, I'd like you to give me your worst. :)

Note: This is tied to northern english dialect. It's kinda like Maya Angelou's "When I think about myself" only it's not about slavery and it's much, much worse.

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I'd LOVE feedback on this; harsh in nature. <3
I really like this story but yeah, I could use your comments.
It's about two boys; new to a school and they develope a friendship/relationship and share their different backgrounds with each other.



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Title: Company
Rating:PG
Prompt: Trinity Blood, Abel/Tres: future fic - immortality is a lonely place.
A/N: Sorry this is so late!

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Okay, I know profic screws this up all the time, too, but seriously? Firing a gun accurately is a skill. Some people have a natural gift for it, some people pick it up fairly fast, pretty much anybody with decent eyes and steady hands can become a good shot with enough practice, but it. Is. A. Skill. You have to learn how to do it. Your OC is not going to be able to pick up a gun and put a bullet between somebody's eyes if she's never touched a gun in her life. Particularly not in the dark when she's shaky from being drugged. Not unless there's some kind of magical interference at work.

Also, guns are freaking loud. Even a plinky little .22 is a lot louder than guns sound in movies; a 12 gauge shotgun is deafening at close range. The neighbors WILL hear it.

That is all.

Title: Loyalty
Rating: PG-13
Warning: Implied sex
Prompt: Count Cain, Riff/Cain: neediness - "O, never leave me."
A/N: Sorry this is so late!


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When your header includes a link to a common disclaimer for your fics stating you plan to address darker themes, I think that's fair warning I'm likely to end up reading something I could find depressing or sad, even scary or squicky.

However, when you link your PG-rated fic to this disclaimer, and your story is nothing but the characters having a thoroughly G-rated conversation about how clever Earthlings were to invent chocolate, I begin to think you and I might have very different definitions of the word "dark."

And no, a story about dark chocolate wouldn't have counted either.

I've realized something extremely frustrating this week about New York's waterfront.

I'm a student filmmaker. I shoot videos, not for profit, but for fun and for my classes. I'm shooting a film in a few weeks where I need to see the skyline. Some accessible waterfront property in Long Island City, Greenpoint or Williamsburg would be ideal. But guess what? There is none.

At least none I can use. Why? Well, a lot of it is private property. Some of it legitimate private property, and some of it illegal private property. There are a lot of PUBLIC streets that are fenced off (illegally) by companies who claim it as their property despite it being a public street owned by the city of New York. So, I can't go to the ends of those streets.

The two main parks (Gantry Plaza and East River) are owned by the state. What does that mean? It means they want to charge me a ridiculous amount of money and wait up to a month to get permits from the state that allow me to film there. Oh, and they only allow it Monday-Friday. (This particular shoot needs to be on a Sunday). If they catch you filming there (as they've done to me twice before at Brooklyn Bridge Park) they kick you out immediately.

And then there's WYNC Transmitter Park which would be great, but the geniuses who "renovated" it recently put up a big beautiful chain link fence that separates land and water and obstructs the view I need.

Water Taxi Beach is another option, I haven't called them yet, but I'm assuming I already know what their answer will be.

So, what do I do? Trespass on some business' property (who are likely closed on Sunday) and risk being arrested? Sure, I could go to Jersey but due to time constraints and my unfamiliarity with the area it's not ideal.

Is there any spot between N 11th street in Williamsburg and the Queensboro Bridge that anybody knows about that I may not?

Couple has a puppy mill. After the death of their two year old daughter, law enforcement gains access to their property and discovers they also have a child mill.

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I...I was dumbstruck.